"Shoe"

[twiggy]

Err.... censorship much.... explicit lyrics.

Oh s***,
The shoe doesn't fit.
I didn't half way expect it,
Because you can't commit,
To s***.

Don't go,
You never gave me time to show,
That you're too dumb to know,
I'm just outside your window,
Just go.

[Chorus]
And I never gave a s***,
Whether the shoe fit!
And I never gave a f***,
My pond is full of muck.
I hate you too.
So f*** the stupid shoe!

Oh h***,
You hide it all to well.
I could never ever tell,
Man, your ego f***ing smells!
Go to h***!

Stay home,
You lice is on my comb,
Hang up the God d*** phone,
And go f*** a traffic cone.
Go home!

[Chorus]
And I never gave a s***,
Whether the shoe fit!
And I never gave a f***,
My pond is full of muck.
I hate you too.
So f*** the stupid shoe!

F*** my shoe,
F*** your shoe,
F*** my shoe,
F*** your shoe,
F*** ALL THE GOD D*** SHOES!

[twiggy]

Full O' Angst.

And critique all you want, it's not going to change.

At all.

[ScarletMornings]

hey, people cuss on here a lot. sometimes it just fits the mood of the tone. i appreciate you blanking it out a little. i've got nothing against angry lyrics. this song seems to have a lot of great potential for a very powerful song, except in some parts you just seem to be grasping at stuff that rhymes which makes it seem forced and breaks the rythm. don't push at rhymes too hard. make sure whatever you're rhyming makes sense. other than that, i think this is really a good song. angry, and explicit, but still good.

[Ramona]

There's nothing wrong with angsty lyrics as long as they're not typical or unoriginal, which this definitely isn't. I like the whole shoe thing, but it seems like in some parts you were just looking for a something to rhyme with.